LK412's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[.Aspiration. [Trance]]

Heyy!

You have something here, you just need to work on it a bit more.

Mixing is an issue, just work on it a bit more, its pain i know but its necessary. I have the same problem :P.

It never really took off, it was the same throughout excluding the piano break (which i loved).

The melody was catchy, but it got a bit repetitive.

There were too many synths going on at once, they were all good, but when u mashed them up together it was messy.

I think all this song needs is some better structure, because it never really took off as i said. You should start slow and build it up to a climax.

A lot of potential, so keep working on it. I wouldn't work on this song more because it would probably hold you back, so start fresh and keep all the criticism you get in mind so you dont repeat the same mistakes and can grow as an artist.

Good luck in the future!

5/5 8/10 Keep it up :D!

b0b3rt responds:

Thanks for the review, ideas =)
I'm a fan =D

[-'+ Unwritten +'-]

Love it!

Amazing piece!

Melodies were amazing from the beginning to the end!

5/5 10/10 +Fav + Downloaded!

Krussi responds:

Thanks alot man :P glad you enjoyed it ^^
And thanks alot for the feedback during the making of it :P
And most of all, thanks for the amazing support man :D

[LK412's Song Preview]

Nice!

Damm i guess i should make one too if it sounds this good.

BTW, its not my version its my version based on his idea.

I didnt copy his melody just made my own the same style.

Thanks!

AWESOME MAN!

momboom1 responds:

haha. Thats what i meant to say, guess i didn't really explain well :). Anyway, working on it right nao :D.

[EX - Forgotten Memories - 50%]

I agree with Helth

Awesome!

Amazing song man, has an immense amount of potential.

Love the piano, and the melody man!

5/5 10/10 +Fav

Hormigas responds:

Thanks, I was kinda hoping to not finish it because I am a little short of ideas. Maybe you will have to wait a little while but I will try. Thanks for the review.

[The Travel to Polaris]

:O!!!!!

THERE IS NO FREAKING AWAY YOU MADE THAT DRUM BEAT!

I DONT BELIEVE YOU, SOUNDS FREAKING SO REALISTIC AND PERFECT!

DUDE, MY FAVORITE SONG FROM YOU BY FARRRR

5/5 10/10 +Fav + Download

OMGOMGOGMGGMOGMOG ITS PERFECT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!! AHHHHHHHHHHHhhh

Helth responds:

YYESSSHHH I DID!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THANKS SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!

[[LC] -Corrupt Contagion]

NICE!

LOVE EVERY SINGLE SECOND OF IT!

The vocals bring it together really nicely and add a really cool feel to it.

As always, 5/5 10/10

YOU DESERVE IT!

ElectricalBypass responds:

Thanks!

[Solus- Nameless]

:O!

Stupid as shit that this didn't make the EP but 8 bit garbage did...

Everything is perfect the way it is TBH, nothing i would change,

5/5 10/10 + Fav + Download

(At least i get this song for free now :D)

SolusLunes responds:

True, there's always a bright side :D

just gotta find it XD