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Good

But the piano really bugged me. It had not sustain on it. Get a new piano VSTi and redo this. Cuz the piano ruins it.

Uhh the rest of it is good but you didn't change any of it you just used the same structure as B0UNC3 did. Agreed you made the piano but there is nothing else to call your own.

Good song ill give u a 5/5 cuz i dont want to hurt your score and 7/10 because of te above reasons.

Uhhh

I mean it is improvised but the melody is all over the place even improvs have some sort of structure as you go along.

Also you could have used the chords better to give it more feeling and a better sound.

Idk what else but i dont want to hurt yours score too much but i have to give u a 4 max cuz this isn't very good as you said. Im not trying to sound harsh thats is just what i think. 4/5 7/10

FairSquare responds:

Thanks for the review!
I don't mind if people don't like my music, because if people don't like your music they usually give advice and you did too.

YES!!!!!

You are so lucky!!! I can't wait War-Spawn!! 5/5 10/10 HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH

Blasphem-E responds:

Rofl, shhh these people don't know

A LOT of potential

This song is really good. First of all you need a club intro. To make it an actual full length professional trance song. Then when the intro is coming to a close fade in with the melody.

When it comes to the melody build it up. Layer some loops. Make that go on for 45 seconds or so. Then add the FX reverb kick.

After the FX kick take :28-:56 and put it in after. Try playing the first melody with the second melody together and see if they don't sound cluttered together and if it sounds good. If it does just use that for maybe 30 seconds.

Then all you need is an outro. I cant think of anything you could do with that so thats ur job.

I really want this to become a full length trance song. 5/5 10/10 Please finish this.

Hope this review helped. =)

Skylence responds:

oh thanks for the really helpfull reveiw

Damn Zero Bombers....

This is a really good ambient song. I loved the way you used the pads really original.

The piano though was my favorite part, really calm and well done. I love the feel of the song something that would make go to sleep.

5/5 10/10 Keep it up man. I always look forward to listening to your songs.

Btw mind checking out my ambient song [LK] Lost. That would be awesome.

Again amazing song and i hope you go somewhere with your music.

Nice

Love the melody. Simple but 20x better than other stuff that i see on here. Love the leads you used. Finish this and it will be an awesome song.

3.20 / 5.00 (+ 0.80) 5/5 10/10

Love It

Can't think of anything to say cuz its just really good except maybe put the volume of "Im Free" Up cuz the first time i couldn't hear it that well, maybe cuz id idnt have any headphones on.

But other than that this song is amazing. 5/5 10/10 Faved

Keep it up man!

Krussi responds:

thanks man :P Umh, the sample says "Bass!" :P So I guess I really need to turn it up then :P
Anyhow, thanks for the reivew, the perfect score and the fav man :D
I'll notify you when its finished :P

Really Good!

5/5 10/10 i have no constructive criticism soz. But i just checked your profile and i also live in Pittsburgh! Small world... Anyways really good man keep it up.

DJ-Dax responds:

Haha thats interesting :P thanks for review too!

LOL WTF!?

This is such an amazing song and it has 6 VOTES! WTF and125 Downloads? How is that possible there is more downloads than listens? F-ED UP. This is really good man i wish i could play guitar.....This could really become something amazing if you worked on this more. Keep it up!

Earlobes are pretty cool.

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