LK412's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[[my minds' eye]]

Amazing

I love what you did with this. The sweeps and VOX were really good. Im guessing the drums were originally a loop? It kinda gets boring after a while with the same drum beat. (I don't know if it varied but if it did it was too subtle)

I like how u mixed in trance in with this. Try replacing the synths with a sitar and see what it sounds like. (Im curious to see)

If you want to change this up a bit for fun for a different project it would be really cool if you made this into a fast trance track. There is one song i know that is really good with this type of theme and maybe you will like it to. Pm me if you want to listen to it.

Really good! This will definitley be on the top 5 of the contest for sure. 5/5 10/10

*Btw its the Hindu religion not Hindi. Hindi is the language.

zomgkerrie responds:

whoops! my bad in "hindi"-meant to type hindu but the stupid i is right next to the u lol
yea, i was having trouble with the drums..i had never made anything like this before-if i had more time i would expand on it! my son has an ear infection and i have the flu so its been an interesting week! i was unable to figure out how to make a sitar melody from scratch- i couldn't find a suitable sitar sound on FL-although i'm JUST learning, and acidpro was no help either. maybe you know?! would love to hear that song you had in mind, i'll shoot you a pm!

Thanks so much for stopping by to take a listen adn for the review!!! <3 Kerrie

[The Pianist's Journey =HFX=]

Awesome

I loved it! Just when you transitioned into the EDM part it kinda ruined it for me. I know this is the feel you were going for after reading your authors comments but i just didnt like it. I like the note changes though.

I think to transition it better keep the piano playing but make the volume of it decrease and make the Synth come in by increasing the volume of it. But do it gradually cuz if its done to fast it might ruin it.

As always the piano is flawless and perfect.

The crowd thing was good but as Kazmo said, kind of repetitive but i think it would be less if you toned the volume of it down just a little.

Overall i loved the song so 5/5 8/10

Phyrnna responds:

Thank you for the review! I'm glad that you enjoyed the song.
Admittedly, the switch into the synths is abrupt. Although I found that it had a sort of appeal that way. Although I'll try the gradual transition too and see if that sounds better.
The crowd seems to not come off the way I wanted it to. I guess I will go tone it down.
Thanks very much for the review!

[B0UNC3 - Crying soul (Darker)]

Good

But the piano really bugged me. It had not sustain on it. Get a new piano VSTi and redo this. Cuz the piano ruins it.

Uhh the rest of it is good but you didn't change any of it you just used the same structure as B0UNC3 did. Agreed you made the piano but there is nothing else to call your own.

Good song ill give u a 5/5 cuz i dont want to hurt your score and 7/10 because of te above reasons.

[MH16: Improvised Piano]

Uhhh

I mean it is improvised but the melody is all over the place even improvs have some sort of structure as you go along.

Also you could have used the chords better to give it more feeling and a better sound.

Idk what else but i dont want to hurt yours score too much but i have to give u a 4 max cuz this isn't very good as you said. Im not trying to sound harsh thats is just what i think. 4/5 7/10

FairSquare responds:

Thanks for the review!
I don't mind if people don't like my music, because if people don't like your music they usually give advice and you did too.

[Wyze+WF1 - F777 tribute]

YES!!!!!

You are so lucky!!! I can't wait War-Spawn!! 5/5 10/10 HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH

Blasphem-E responds:

Rofl, shhh these people don't know

[Trance Nation (demo)]

A LOT of potential

This song is really good. First of all you need a club intro. To make it an actual full length professional trance song. Then when the intro is coming to a close fade in with the melody.

When it comes to the melody build it up. Layer some loops. Make that go on for 45 seconds or so. Then add the FX reverb kick.

After the FX kick take :28-:56 and put it in after. Try playing the first melody with the second melody together and see if they don't sound cluttered together and if it sounds good. If it does just use that for maybe 30 seconds.

Then all you need is an outro. I cant think of anything you could do with that so thats ur job.

I really want this to become a full length trance song. 5/5 10/10 Please finish this.

Hope this review helped. =)

Skylence responds:

oh thanks for the really helpfull reveiw

[(NUB)Dying Alone In Space(Prev]

Damn Zero Bombers....

This is a really good ambient song. I loved the way you used the pads really original.

The piano though was my favorite part, really calm and well done. I love the feel of the song something that would make go to sleep.

5/5 10/10 Keep it up man. I always look forward to listening to your songs.

Btw mind checking out my ambient song [LK] Lost. That would be awesome.

Again amazing song and i hope you go somewhere with your music.

[Craving the Trance (Demo)]

Nice

Love the melody. Simple but 20x better than other stuff that i see on here. Love the leads you used. Finish this and it will be an awesome song.

3.20 / 5.00 (+ 0.80) 5/5 10/10

[-'+ Keep on Soaring +'- Final?]

Love It

Can't think of anything to say cuz its just really good except maybe put the volume of "Im Free" Up cuz the first time i couldn't hear it that well, maybe cuz id idnt have any headphones on.

But other than that this song is amazing. 5/5 10/10 Faved

Keep it up man!

Krussi responds:

thanks man :P Umh, the sample says "Bass!" :P So I guess I really need to turn it up then :P
Anyhow, thanks for the reivew, the perfect score and the fav man :D
I'll notify you when its finished :P

[~Dax~ Broken]

Really Good!

5/5 10/10 i have no constructive criticism soz. But i just checked your profile and i also live in Pittsburgh! Small world... Anyways really good man keep it up.

DJ-Dax responds:

Haha thats interesting :P thanks for review too!