OMG
I love you.
5/5 10/10
OMG
I love you.
5/5 10/10
Will you marry me?
You are Amazing.
The beatbox was freaking awesome.
Dude you are amazing seriously.
5/5 10/10 +Fav +Fav Artist
Dude, YOU'RE amazing. My favorite person by far.
Omg!
This is awesome man!
Im pretty sure you are the only acapella musician on NG, and a good one and that.
5/5 10/10
Thanks man! I like being the only one. Hahaha.
Awesome!
I always love acapella songs!
Only problem is when the verse comes in it gets kind of hectic. The chorus was done really well though.
Really amazing man, i love songs like this.
5/5 10/10 +Fav +Download.
Really Nice!
The first melo has a real Envy feel to it. If you want to make a song out of that one, just listen to his songs, see how it progresses, the elements he uses and base it off that. But remember always add your own originality so you dont look like a copycat.
the second one could be a good intro melody for the first melo.
If i were to make a song with those 2 melodies this is how i would make it progress.
Intro: Second melody with a cutoff fade in with heavy percs backing it up. Make it a DnB style. 30-45 seconds
Climax: 1st melody with the same heave percs and energy 30 - 45 seconds
Break: Make a third melody possible or make a variation of one of the melodies with strings backing it and maybe some piano chords as well. 20-30 seconds
Climax 2: 1st melody for about 25 seconds and then bring in the intro melody to back it up.
Outro: Cant think of anything atm but you can do that.
Hope this helps.
These melodies have real potential, hope you make something awesome out of it.
5/5 10/10 Keep it up.
Awesome!
This is an awesome remix really, the drum loops, and transitions were awesome.
Only problem, is the melody. I normally LOVE your melodies because of their catchiness and simplicity. This one is WAYYY to crazy and really disrupts the songs flow, its all over the place.
The break, and trasitions were awesome.
Mixing/Mastering is a problem, but i hardly ever judge a song on that, but we really need to figure out how to figure out how to do that well.
Anyways this is an awesome song, keep it up man.
5/5 9/10
we definitely have to work on our mixing mastering, also pm me which melo your talking about? perhaps ill make it more simple, alright thanks a lot man for taking the time to review! : ]
well be in touch
Awesome!
This is amazing for a beginner!
You've gotten nowhere since the first purchase.
Awesome song, the beat was sick, but the presets u used for synths were annoying and boring.
Good overall 5/5 10/10
HOW ABOUT GETTING OFF BEATSOURCES ACCOUNT HUH?
STOP REVIEWING SONGS UNDER HIS ACCOUNT TO MAKE YOU LOOK BETTER OK?
"I am amazed. This is one of the best first songs in history.
I love your style, it is orignal and awesome.
I love ur use of automations and effects.
The VOX? in the back were a very nice detailed touch.
This song is better than my songs in production by far!
You are definitley VERY gifted.
PM with ur MSN if u get the chance. I would love to hear more of your work.
5/5 10/10 +Fav"
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AWESOME!
I think at when the main melo comes in, you should get rid of the arp and accentuate the lead to make it more hardtyle-ish.
The intro was SICKKKK i love the FX you used, it was amazing seriously,
Finish your dam projects man, lol.
5/5 10/10
Really Nice
Though this song could have been SOOOOO much better.
The intro piano, is too crazy, i say make it simple and soft. Make it build up to the synth melody. The arp cant hold the weight of the synth lead by itself. I think you should use that as the background and add a catchy synth lead on top of the arm throughout the song.
The VOX was really well placed and awesome.
Good work man, keep it up!
5/5 9/10
ok i'll see what i can do :D
thank you for the review ;-D
Really Nice!
Really unique, not something you find everyday.
Awesome song man, amazing job.
5/5 10/10
Thanks pal :)
Earlobes are pretty cool.
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