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Nice!

You are still on the recent submissions page and you have: 17 Reviews, 48 Votes, 189 Listens, and 24 download.

Im lucky if i can get that in a month.

Anyways, this is definitely better then most of your other works because of the break and the break melody. Really amazing man.

The rest is Paragon as usual, and it is still very well produced. I cant believe you can make a 180 bpm song 4:07. That is skill at its finest. Didn't get repetitive at the slightest.

Only problem is the ending crash. I think you should just remove it altogether and make it loopable. It makes it sound better and is better suited of VG's.

Love the use of cutoff and the drum beat and transitions were awesome.

Expecting this to get Best of the Week as always.

5/5 10/10 Awesome overall.

OMG

I love you.

5/5 10/10

FolegAlmighty responds:

Will you marry me?

You are Amazing.

The beatbox was freaking awesome.

Dude you are amazing seriously.

5/5 10/10 +Fav +Fav Artist

FolegAlmighty responds:

Dude, YOU'RE amazing. My favorite person by far.

Omg!

This is awesome man!

Im pretty sure you are the only acapella musician on NG, and a good one and that.

5/5 10/10

FolegAlmighty responds:

Thanks man! I like being the only one. Hahaha.

Awesome!

I always love acapella songs!

Only problem is when the verse comes in it gets kind of hectic. The chorus was done really well though.

Really amazing man, i love songs like this.

5/5 10/10 +Fav +Download.

Really Nice!

The first melo has a real Envy feel to it. If you want to make a song out of that one, just listen to his songs, see how it progresses, the elements he uses and base it off that. But remember always add your own originality so you dont look like a copycat.

the second one could be a good intro melody for the first melo.

If i were to make a song with those 2 melodies this is how i would make it progress.

Intro: Second melody with a cutoff fade in with heavy percs backing it up. Make it a DnB style. 30-45 seconds

Climax: 1st melody with the same heave percs and energy 30 - 45 seconds

Break: Make a third melody possible or make a variation of one of the melodies with strings backing it and maybe some piano chords as well. 20-30 seconds

Climax 2: 1st melody for about 25 seconds and then bring in the intro melody to back it up.

Outro: Cant think of anything atm but you can do that.

Hope this helps.

These melodies have real potential, hope you make something awesome out of it.

5/5 10/10 Keep it up.

Awesome!

This is an awesome remix really, the drum loops, and transitions were awesome.

Only problem, is the melody. I normally LOVE your melodies because of their catchiness and simplicity. This one is WAYYY to crazy and really disrupts the songs flow, its all over the place.

The break, and trasitions were awesome.

Mixing/Mastering is a problem, but i hardly ever judge a song on that, but we really need to figure out how to figure out how to do that well.

Anyways this is an awesome song, keep it up man.

5/5 9/10

Champius responds:

we definitely have to work on our mixing mastering, also pm me which melo your talking about? perhaps ill make it more simple, alright thanks a lot man for taking the time to review! : ]

well be in touch

Awesome!

This is amazing for a beginner!

You've gotten nowhere since the first purchase.

Awesome song, the beat was sick, but the presets u used for synths were annoying and boring.

Good overall 5/5 10/10

ElectricalBypass responds:

HOW ABOUT GETTING OFF BEATSOURCES ACCOUNT HUH?

STOP REVIEWING SONGS UNDER HIS ACCOUNT TO MAKE YOU LOOK BETTER OK?

"I am amazed. This is one of the best first songs in history.

I love your style, it is orignal and awesome.

I love ur use of automations and effects.

The VOX? in the back were a very nice detailed touch.

This song is better than my songs in production by far!

You are definitley VERY gifted.

PM with ur MSN if u get the chance. I would love to hear more of your work.

5/5 10/10 +Fav"

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AWESOME!

I think at when the main melo comes in, you should get rid of the arp and accentuate the lead to make it more hardtyle-ish.

The intro was SICKKKK i love the FX you used, it was amazing seriously,

Finish your dam projects man, lol.

5/5 10/10

Really Nice

Though this song could have been SOOOOO much better.

The intro piano, is too crazy, i say make it simple and soft. Make it build up to the synth melody. The arp cant hold the weight of the synth lead by itself. I think you should use that as the background and add a catchy synth lead on top of the arm throughout the song.

The VOX was really well placed and awesome.

Good work man, keep it up!

5/5 9/10

Fredgy responds:

ok i'll see what i can do :D
thank you for the review ;-D

Earlobes are pretty cool.

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